Some grammatical corrections and other improvements (Hamburg)

Some grammatical corrections and other improvements, all wayspots are in Hamburg, Germany

1) Title: Spielplatz Vörstekoppel.

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.662611,10.083641&z=16&pll=53.662611,10.083641

Additional information: Please take the dot away in the title so it is "Spielplatz Vörstekoppel" and in the description correct a little mistake and change it to "Spielplatz für die Wohnungen an der Vörstekoppel".


2) Title: Wochenmarkt Häuschen

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.66088,10.085033&z=16&pll=53.66088,10.085033

Additional information: For grammatical reasons please change the title to "Wochenmarkt-Häuschen" and the description to "Das Häuschen steht auf einem öffentlichen Platz mit viel Platz."


3) Title: Oldtymer in der Garage

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.652855,10.106336&z=16&pll=53.652855,10.106336

Additional information: Please change the title to "Oldtimer in der Garage" and the description to "Künstlerisch bemalter Stromkasten an der Saseler Chaussee. Abgebildet ist ein ,,Opel Rekord P1", welcher in einer Garage steht." (All for grammatical reasons)


4) Title: Zeit Sparen

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.653925,10.110064&z=16&pll=53.653925,10.110064

Additional information: Verbs are usually not written in capital letters in german so please change the title to "Zeit sparen"


5) Title: Kurz Nach Halb Eins

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.65298,10.077103&z=15&pll=53.65298,10.077103

Additional information: Only the first of those words should be with a capital letter so please change the title to "Kurz nach halb eins"


6) Title: Wasser Kugel

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.651205,10.077212&z=15&pll=53.651205,10.077212

Additional information: In this case the two connected words should be written together like "Wasserkugel" so please change it to that title.


7) Title: Norbert Schmid Platz

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.653881,10.061541&z=16&pll=53.653881,10.061541

Additional information: There should be hyphens between the words so please change the title to "Norbert-Schmid-Platz". That's also the official name, you can compare to google maps

https://maps.app.goo.gl/jkKbpippFMww8CNe6


8) Title: Stahl Mann

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.654016,10.060936&z=16&pll=53.654016,10.060936

Additional information: These two words should be written together so please change the title to "Stahlmann".


9) Title: Paul Von Hindenburg 1847-1934

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.643195,10.077515&z=16&pll=53.643195,10.077515

Additional information: In the title change the capital "V" to a normal "v" --> "Paul von Hindenburg 1847-1934" and please change the description to "Ein Denkmal für Paul von Hindenburg in Wellingsbüttel".


10) Title: Ev.Luth.Lukaskirchengemeinde

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.644635,10.105827&z=16&pll=53.644635,10.105827

Additional information: After each dot is supposed to be a space so please change it to "Ev. Luth. Lukaskirchengemeinde"


11) Title: Freie Evangelische Gemeinde Sasel

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.644327,10.10222&z=16&pll=53.644327,10.10222

Additional information: Please change the title to "Freie evangelische Gemeinde FeG Hamburg-Sasel" as it is more precise and grammatically correct. In the description please delete the URL and change it to "Kirchengemeinde in Hamburg".


12) Title: Marder Am Marderstieg

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.657933,10.070633&z=16&pll=53.657933,10.070633

Additional information: The title of the art is "Zwei Marder" (Check here: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Skulptur_Ecke_MarderstraatMarderstieg) so please change the title to that and also change the description to "Bronzeskulptur von Kurt Bauer aus dem Jahr 1969. Sie zeigt zwei Marder und befindet sich am Marderstieg/Marderstraat in Hamburg-Poppenbüttel."


13) Title: Hahn Poppenbüttel

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.651306,10.092664&z=18&pll=53.651306,10.092664

Additional information: The official title of that art is "Krähender Hahn" (compare: https://de.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datei:Pirwitz_Kr%C3%A4hender_Hahn_Hamburg-Poppenb%C3%BCttel5.JPG) so please change the title to that. Also please add the description "Skulptur von Maria Pirwitz aus dem Jahr 1965. Sie zeigt einen krähenden Hahn und befindet sich vor der Polizeidienststelle in Poppenbüttel."


14) Title: Mohnblumen-Stromkasten

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.646875,10.115994&z=17&pll=53.646875,10.115994

Additional information: In the description there is a little mistake with one word so please change the description to "Ein künstlerisch bemalter Stromkasten in Hamburg-Sasel. Abgebildet sind rote Mohnblumen in einer Wiese."


15) Title: Spielplatz Kramer-Krai-Weg

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.66538,10.078364&z=18&pll=53.66538,10.078364

Additional information: There is a little mistake in the title, please change it to "Spielplatz Kramer-Kray-Weg" (With an "Y" instead of an "I")


16) Title: Tischtennisplatte

Location: https://intel.ingress.com/intel?ll=53.663528,10.077921&z=17&pll=53.663528,10.077921

Additional information: There is a typing mistake in the description, please change it to "Die Tischtennisplatte wurde für mehr Sport im Freien aufgestellt."

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