Acceptance e-mails

It is great you've redesign acceptance e-mails.
BUT.
There is lack of point to the information.
Before: it was information in first sentence about eligibility. o need to say it was on top, over the rest of the message.
Now: useless bigger font for information about nomination name; zero clarification about decision in title; need to look through huge e-mail to find information somewhere in the middle.
I'm not saying redesign is super bad but need to brush it a little bit. It's just wasting of time now to read through that kind of e-mails.
Comments
In Japan, some people misunderstand approval and denial. In case of approval, in case of disapproval, in case of disapproval, is it possible to use a clearly different font such as black and white?