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How could this be improved?
It could be considered by reviewers as a generic store I fear
One thing I would do is reword the supporting information. I did a quick Google of the company, and that text you used is lifted verbatim from their website, which could get seen as plagiarism and/or laziness on your part. You can definitely use the information, just paraphrase it a bit.