Framing a submission
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What is the best way to have these accepted.
The first so it doesn't get married as a duplicate.
The second so it doesn't get marked as generic business
What is the best way to have these accepted.
The first so it doesn't get married as a duplicate.
The second so it doesn't get marked as generic business
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About 150 feet away in the same park are a set of 4 other courts that already exist. They are LTA owned and more just turn up, pay and play. The submission is a separate club with clubhouse, coaching etc.
I don't like having to say these are separate but know that the first courts will show on the list of nearby for reviewers.
The second which I've always considered submitting but held off since businesses were tough to get accepted.
Petersham Nurseries is a lifestyle destination that includes a plant nursery, an elegant greenhouse restaurant offering set menus for all diners, a shop selling exquisite antiques, homewares and gifts and a teahouse offering wholesome seasonal dishes and homemade cakes. It is a place of calm, away from the bustle of London, that respects and is in tune with nature and positive living. The Boglione family, who own the nurseries and live in the adjoining Petersham House are rooted to their blend of British and Italian culture which remains at the heart of the business and is reflected in the style of the food that is served. Petersham Nurseries Café is inspired by what is growing in our kitchen garden and by the produce supplied to us by our sister company, Haye Farm. Whilst maintaining their passion for simplicity, flora, fauna and responsibly sourced produce they have created an unparalleled setting just outside of central London.
Michelin starred, lots of awards.
Unfortunately it doesn't really have a sign this is the main entrance
It's definitely unique enough but the lack of sign and the nursery name is off putting.
Looking at the tennis courts I can see some orange ones and separate green ones on satellite- very technical terms 😂
I presume this is the orange ones?
I would have taken the photo minus the fence it never feels good and presents a barrier in the mind.
I would leave out reference to club house or reviewers might expect the pin to be on the club house.
maybe the LTA info to supplementary and in description the courts are open to the public for drop in informal play, and the club organises more formal sessions and competitions.
I think you do need to spell out that these are distinct - and also say the are very distinct on satellite view. ????
Second one it sounds good.
is it about socialising in the cafe restaurant with all those awards or about the whole. I would focus on restaurant.
The entrance is a bit bland and doesn’t show anything that sh outs this is what the business is. Is there no sign on the restaurant?
Thanks. I'd have to join the club to get a picture without fence :D
I will and add in a bit of history and it's general ethos in support.
The restaurant/cafe is located in the middle surrounded by everything else.
It's quite a pricey, well to do place. If I walk in with my Dr Who t shirt on and start to take pictures I'll be wrestled to the ground by rugby playing posh boys and thrown in the Thames :(
Surely not 😂 some of them must be Doctor Who fans?
Even outside the restaurant ?
now that is real anti-social behaviour.
You need to try harder with the tennis court 😎
This one I did not long ago (and was approved)
As you can see from supporting photo a standard chain fence but you can get a fence less picture- it hadn’t opened for the day and I didn’t want to wait to blag my way in.
I'd have to go through the clubhouse then onto the locked courts so I don't think it's possible.
I carefully aligned camera lens with a gap in fence had to have a few goes to get one with a good angle….but it’s more of a nicety.
Thanks, I'll give it a go.
Yeah, I tend to agree that the fence in the image is also an obstacle for reviewers. As mentioned, you can get a picture though the fence… I took this of a water slide at a community pool not so long ago. The pool is closed for the season and doesn’t even have water, but I at least managed to get this through the chain link fence.
The garden/restaurant sounds incredible. I’d be tempted to submit that mediocre entrance just because the subject seems so strong.
Thanks I'll find a quiet time and try to not get arrested.
Well, don't us that text as it's 3rd party text.
Thanks, I know. I haven't submitted yet, I'll reword with a bit more brevity when I do
If it reads like an advert, then it usually is, and I'll usually run a chunk of it through Google looking for the source. Just get a photo of the Michelen Star plaque - that would do it for me for the restarant.
That's a good call. I'll mooch around the garden centre and shop and see if I can get away with not paying for their £150 lunch while getting a photo :/
Just start saying how wonderful it is and can I take a picture to show person x that this is such a great place and fantastic value etc etc
I have a park with 29 fields, some are the same sport right beside each other. A couple of days ago I got twins get upgraded at the same time and both were approved. I have been working on triplets now. I got the first one in the middle, I switched the main photo for it's numbered plaque and will sub the next two at the same time too.