Hello , can you give me feedback of this "entry of bublic garden
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Dear wiever , if you have the time can you explaine why this doesent passed.
Dear wiever , if you have the time can you explaine why this doesent passed.
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It looks a good nomination to me.
Since you have a sign it should be alright as a great place for meeting people and also for exploration. But you need to set the location on the sign.
I'd say the problem is that it seems that you're nominating the gate, not the garden. I'd change the title to Jardin Public Ville de Comines.
If the garden is already a Wayspot and you're actually nominating the gate, the I'd say it won't meet the acceptance criteria, as the gate seems generic.
thanks guys nice help
Hello,
Si je puis me permettre, essayes de corriger la description, 3 fautes sur une phrase risquent de faire baisser la note...
-> "Entrée Est du parc communal appelé jardin public"
Titre également à corriger. (publique -> public)
Tu peux toujours corriger sur wayfarer tant que la propale est "en attente", c'est pas toujours évident sur le téléphone lors de la soumission.
For all english speakers, just giving an advice in french on typo checking before submitting.
Your new nomination is much better, I think. The description still could use improvement, though. It looks like it again talks about the entrance, but you're nominating the garden, not the entrance. I would say something about what is in the garden, or when it was established, or even just what street it's on or what part of the city it's in. Doesn't have to be very long, but it would be nicer than what is currently in the description.
Merci à vous pour tout ces conseils.
Thanks for all.
Hello guys thanks you for your help .