Please can you tell me what I did wrong?

So I'm gonna try and tranlate. It was not accepted because of "doesn't meet the criteria", "is seasonal", "it's on private property".


I'm really thinking otherwise and would like to hear your advice so I can improve :)


"Two Totems"

"Two totem poles, decorated by children, guard the trail."



"Those poles are standing just alongside a nice trail, not on private property, and they look really interesting!"


Thanks in advance!

Sari

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