I’m not sure if this should go here, Nomination Support or else where. Please advise if there is a better place (though I suspect if there is, the folks with the power will move it :- ).
There is a mural at a local community center that is a wayspot and I was trying to improve the description.
old:
senior center
My suggestion:
Kaplan “Kapache1” Bunce, October, 2019. One of several murals commissioned by SJWalls (f/k/a Pow! Wow! San Jose) that year for the area.
Now, because of the character limit, I have stopped doing things like “Artist: Kaplan “Kapache1” Bunce. Date: October, 2019. ” So, even though in a case like this there would be room, for consistency, I left off those descriptors.
Any thoughts on what else I could add?
I recently added a new POI from the same center, another mural done at the same time, and that one reads:
Alice Lee, October, 2019. One of several murals commissioned by SJWalls (f/k/a Pow! Wow! San Jose) that year for the area.
So, that was good enough for a new one, but the similar was not for an edit. Of course, on a nomination, the description is just one thing being considered, so maybe it was weak and the rest got it through.
Many of the other pieces done that year are also wayspots, and I was going to slowly make sure they all had similar info. But if it needs more, I should come up with a better template first.
For example, another one I have queued up:
Andres “Cobre” Iglesias, October, 2019. One of several murals commissioned by SJWalls (f/k/a Pow! Wow! San Jose) that year for the area. Subject is artist’s son.
Thoughts? Or am I over thinking it and should just resubmit?